Malo le lelei Akira-Lee, great to see you’ve posted up your 4 facts about the Queen. I wonder when her actual birthday is?
See if you can go back and proof-read, include Capital letters for beginning of the sentence and proper names (names of people).
You might want to do some research about ‘Queen’s in the world?’. Remember ‘proof-read and edit!
Malo le lelei Akira-Lee, great to see you’ve posted up your 4 facts about the Queen. I wonder when her actual birthday is?
See if you can go back and proof-read, include Capital letters for beginning of the sentence and proper names (names of people).
You might want to do some research about ‘Queen’s in the world?’. Remember ‘proof-read and edit!